I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Malo e lelei Maddock. I like your post because you made it into an animation and I liked that the animation was smooth. I liked how you put the links too. I don't think you needed to post about this because it is on your blog but if someone finds the video randomly, maybe they can go on your blog.
Malo e lelei, Maddock! I like your post because it was well made. The animation was also very great! I was reminded about the time I went to the Student Summit this year, and a booth was about Biteable. But maybe next time you could use punctuation and capital letters. Blog you later! From Mikayla.
Hello it is Tyran from Hornby Primary School. I like the way that you done the website so people can go on it. I like that you are putting stuff on your blog. Was Biteable easy to use?
Hi, this is Vilar from Hornby Primary school. I like the way that you have shown people how to comment on your blog. Did you think about putting capital letters at the start of a sentences?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Malo e lelei Maddock.
ReplyDeleteI like your post because you made it into an animation and I liked that the animation was smooth. I liked how you put the links too. I don't think you needed to post about this because it is on your blog but if someone finds the video randomly, maybe they can go on your blog.
Malo e lelei, Maddock!
ReplyDeleteI like your post because it was well made. The animation was also very great! I was reminded about the time I went to the Student Summit this year, and a booth was about Biteable. But maybe next time you could use punctuation and capital letters.
Blog you later!
From Mikayla.
Hello it is Tyran from Hornby Primary School. I like the way that you done the website so people can go on it. I like that you are putting stuff on your blog. Was Biteable easy to use?
ReplyDeleteHi, this is Vilar from Hornby Primary school. I like the way that you have shown people how to comment on your blog. Did you think about putting capital letters at the start of a sentences?
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