I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Maddock, I have looked at your beautiful rat thing and it looked a bit different to me to picture that like a rat. I looked at the tail and it looked like a leopard tail. Next time you could tell more about your beautiful rat thing. -Angel
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Maddock, I have looked at your beautiful rat thing and it looked a bit different to me to picture that like a rat. I looked at the tail and it looked like a leopard tail. Next time you could tell more about your beautiful rat thing. -Angel
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