returning back to school

The night before school i was  very very shy   i  went to make a snack and my  lunch for school . Because i   was really shy to go back to school . And then i  went to sleep. but when i   woke up i   was kinda looking ford to going back to school and then when i got to the school gate i  was so excited and when i  got in the class i  was more excited when i got to see my friends and play manhunt with most of most of my friends 

draft 1

hello i am going to share my draft 1 out of 2 our teacher gave us work to do it was writing about going back to school i was really shy to come back to school but now that i'm back at school i'm  excited  i would really like to now how i could improve it  bye