The night before school i was very very shy i went to make a snack and my lunch for school . Because i was really shy to go back to school . And then i went to sleep. but when i woke up i was kinda looking ford to going back to school and then when i got to the school gate i was so excited and when i got in the class i was more excited when i got to see my friends and play manhunt with most of most of my friends
I really like how you highlighted the feeling words and maybe you can use full stops instead of the "and". You should also make your writing a little bit more sense.
ReplyDeleteHello Maddock.
ReplyDeleteGood on you for making your own lunch.Do you get to put anything you want in your lunch box?.
I try and get my lunch ready the night before,but that doesn't always happen.
hello yea i got to put a wrap in my lunch yea i pack my lunch
DeleteHello Maddock.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
Hello Maddock.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.