I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello everyone is my colour poem that i have been working on.The colour that I picked is orange I picked orange because it makes me feel calm. Thank you for reading my blog
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Maddock.
ReplyDeleteI like your last line,that made me giggle.I like that the illustrations match your text.
Can you explain what a Nike swoosh is please?.
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DeleteHello its like a arrow under the word nike thank you for commenting on my blog.
DeleteHi Maddock I like your orange poem. I also like oranges they are yummy and juice.
ReplyDeleteHello Maddock, This is a cool blog post that you have done. I like the juicy words you have usen. What does hi viz mean? Have a great night -Angel
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