Me and my buddy have been working on a toy invention. We have been making a board game
like monopoly but with catapults and money guns and instead of planes and boats trains where using cars. We have to color it up. My buddie is is jherean we would like it if you could leave a comment about what you think 
Hi Maddock, this looks like a really great idea for a game. I love that your idea is original and that even though you have used Monopoly as your inspiration you have still made the game your own. I like that you have labeled some of the parts of your game. How has it been working with your partner? How do you play your board game? Do you learn about planets along the way? Come and see me tomorrow and I will show you how to fix up your post so that we can see all your writing as at the moment it is running off the side of your page!
ReplyDeleteHello Maddock,
ReplyDeleteI like you and Jhereans plan that you have done for your toy invention. I have read through what your plan is. Next time you could put your writing on the page because it is a bit on the background. Bye -Angel