I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello maddock its Chevelle here. I liked the way you made it very funny. Maybe next time you could add a moustache. This part gave me memorary about when i made my snow man.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello maddock its Chevelle here. I liked the way you made it very funny. Maybe next time you could add a moustache. This part gave me memorary about when i made my snow man.
ReplyDeletehi Maddock I love it. it looks nice gangster you have there. good job you have a good imagination. maybe can you do more writing bye bye
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