I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I have been learning about hurricanes and when Mrs raisin wasn't here Mr shin was a substitute teacher and he was really nice and Mrs raisin made a slide with a couple of questions and must-dos.
Malo e lelei Maddock. Nice writing! I just think that you could add more writing to make it more interesting, Maybe work on you're grammar as well. Nice wow words!
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Malo e lelei Maddock.
ReplyDeleteNice writing! I just think that you could add more writing to make it more interesting, Maybe work on you're grammar as well. Nice wow words!
hi Maddock.
ReplyDeleteNice writing! I just think that you could add more writing to make it more. Nice wow words from connor A