I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Maddock, remember to preview your post before hitting publish. You need to make is "small" before embedding it on your blog, otherwise it hangs off the side like this.
kia ora it's Nikau.I like your background because it matches with the mariana trench.next time try to make it smaller because it's way to big.how did you get all of those facts.
HI Maddock, I really like you blog and i like your blog cause you show a video and maybe you could do it a small and This part gave me a memory about when i was doing my work in Literacy and good job again:)
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Maddock, remember to preview your post before hitting publish. You need to make is "small" before embedding it on your blog, otherwise it hangs off the side like this.
ReplyDeletekia ora it's Nikau.I like your background because it matches with the mariana trench.next time try to make it smaller because it's way to big.how did you get all of those facts.
ReplyDeletehi nikau i read the Paper and i google searched
DeleteHI Maddock,
ReplyDeleteI really like you blog and i like your blog cause you show a video and maybe you could do it a small and This part gave me a memory about when i was doing my work in Literacy and good job again:)
How did you do thes
ReplyDeletehi james do what
DeleteHI Maddock, its Aliyah
ReplyDeleteI really like you blog post. Maybe next time you could ask your teacher if she could help you make it not across the page/blog.
hi Maddock it is Tane here
ReplyDeletedid you no that there is theres things called the black smokers in the Mariana Trench
good jod with what you have down