I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Maddock, to be honest i don't know what going here i mean your size of you slide it's so big! i think you should fix that! i see with you other post it small big (i mean the size) and you have re posted the same thing the same thing but this is really good i like how you have the length width & Depth of the mariana trench anyway i have to go now bye!
Hi Maddock, The interesting part was the sum of the sea creatures in the Mariana Trench,Your video of who lives in the bottom of the Mariana Trench. I noticed that the slide 3 and slide 4 has been written by a little bit only, maybe you can write a lot and more interesting word, bye XD
Hi Maddock, It's Raewyn. My favourite part was the video that a guy found a big fish. When you said " called black smokers" that just remind me I had some facts that says "what is the bottom of the sea". maybe when you are gonna post another blog maybe you should make it a little bit smaller.
Hi Maddock It's Hakeem And Did You Know That There Are Creatures Call'd That Japanese Spider Crab. Maybe Next Time You Could Make An Animation About FNAF/FIVE NIGHTS AT FREDDY'S. See You Next Time Bye.
Hi Maddock i liked the way you put how it is and i like you're video what live at the bottom of the sea. next time try not to publish it twice blog you later bye.
Hello Maddock! I liked the way that you had a video about the mariana trench and sea. did you think about writing more facts? next time you could make the post a little smaller. anyway blog you later!
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sup g i like your mariana trench thing i,m puting an cool thing an a intreting thing and good job keep it up and thanks for this
ReplyDeleteHi maddock its brodie here i like the way miles.did you think about putting full stops.next time you could make it a lot smaller ok blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Maddock, to be honest i don't know what going here i mean your size of you slide it's so big! i think you should fix that! i see with you other post it small big (i mean the size) and you have re posted the same thing the same thing but this is really good i like how you have the length width & Depth of the mariana trench anyway i have to go now bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Maddock, The interesting part was the sum of the sea creatures in the Mariana Trench,Your video of who lives in the bottom of the Mariana Trench. I noticed that the slide 3 and slide 4 has been written by a little bit only, maybe you can write a lot and more interesting word, bye XD
ReplyDeleteHi Maddock, It's Raewyn. My favourite part was the video that a guy found a big fish. When you said " called black smokers" that just remind me I had some facts that says "what is the bottom of the sea". maybe when you are gonna post another blog maybe you should make it a little bit smaller.
ReplyDeleteHi Maddock It's Hakeem And Did You Know That There Are Creatures Call'd That Japanese Spider Crab. Maybe Next Time You Could Make An Animation About FNAF/FIVE NIGHTS AT FREDDY'S. See You Next Time Bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Maddock i liked the way you put how it is and i like you're video what live at the bottom of the sea. next time try not to publish it twice blog you later bye.
ReplyDeletekia ora maddock,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you told us enough info to know what's down in the trench.
Next time don't do large because its not veary tidy
Hello Maddock! I liked the way that you had a video about the mariana trench and sea. did you think about writing more facts? next time you could make the post a little smaller. anyway blog you later!
ReplyDeletekia ora maddock,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you told as enough info about mariana trench.