I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
hello we are writing about a film named the present this is my writing let me know if you like it by leaving a comment thanks for reading my blog have a good day the reasons there highlighted yellow is because there verbs
Hello Maddock, This writing is great. The present sounds like an exiting film to watch. Next time you could put a link in for people to watch it. Maybe you could also write when you say the boy you could write Jhon because thats his name. What did you like about the film? -Angel
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
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DeleteHello Maddock, This writing is great. The present sounds like an exiting film to watch. Next time you could put a link in for people to watch it. Maybe you could also write when you say the boy you could write Jhon because thats his name. What did you like about the film? -Angel
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