I was scattering around the moon trying not to get catched by the aliens and
to top it off the no gravity i decided to jump in one of the holes the I seen in
front of me I took a big leap and landed in the hole the aliens ran straight
past me I climbed up and got out of the hole and was trying to figure out
how I got here and then I felt a huge hit it was like a earthquake my feet
were glued to the ground as I had my hand to the side of my body
balancing my body so I don't fall over then I seen a big crack in the
ground coming towards me so I ran to my right and it was still coming for me
I ran to my left it was still coming after me so I ran towards it and was
balancing over it and jumped to the side and i slipped and then got up
and ran and I was still following me so I jumped into another hole and
it stopped I got up and got out and ran it wasn't chasing me anymore.
So I kept running and I felt another crack and I came to a stop and planted
my feet to the ground and balanced my body with my arms to my left and
right on took a huge leap and hit my head and blacked out for about 3
minutes I woke up and started blinking to get my vision back I was in a
hole on the moon I pulled myself up looked around to see if I could see
any cracks I didn't see any so i pulled myself up and got out of the hole
and started walking around to think about how I got here and I saw a
rocket ship and the door was wide open I climbed inside to see what
was in there and I saw a phone I turned it on but it didn't have any
reception so I continued to look around
to top it off the no gravity i decided to jump in one of the holes the I seen in
front of me I took a big leap and landed in the hole the aliens ran straight
past me I climbed up and got out of the hole and was trying to figure out
how I got here and then I felt a huge hit it was like a earthquake my feet
were glued to the ground as I had my hand to the side of my body
balancing my body so I don't fall over then I seen a big crack in the
ground coming towards me so I ran to my right and it was still coming for me
I ran to my left it was still coming after me so I ran towards it and was
balancing over it and jumped to the side and i slipped and then got up
and ran and I was still following me so I jumped into another hole and
it stopped I got up and got out and ran it wasn't chasing me anymore.
So I kept running and I felt another crack and I came to a stop and planted
my feet to the ground and balanced my body with my arms to my left and
right on took a huge leap and hit my head and blacked out for about 3
minutes I woke up and started blinking to get my vision back I was in a
hole on the moon I pulled myself up looked around to see if I could see
any cracks I didn't see any so i pulled myself up and got out of the hole
and started walking around to think about how I got here and I saw a
rocket ship and the door was wide open I climbed inside to see what
was in there and I saw a phone I turned it on but it didn't have any
reception so I continued to look around
Well done Maddock.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have photo shopped the picture.You have used some great descriptive words and I like how you 'planted your feet' and 'balanced your body'.
If you could travel to the moon would you do it and why?.
Hello Maddock, This is a great piece of writing. I like the first starting you have usen which was I was Scattering around the moon.I also like you're picture that you have done. Next time you could put some more full stops in, and capitals letters. Did this take a long time to write? -Angel
Deletewow this story is so great i like ur story because it said what you did an the theme of space is cool
ReplyDeletehey there maddock this is great your in space with aliens you work good on this maddock i like your photo and your background.
ReplyDeletehey Tyrone thanks for commenting on my blog
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