I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
hey bloggers today i will be sharing my work that we have been doing in the past week we have been using genia.ly it is and site its about character description when you check it out could you leave a comment what about what you think byeeee have a good week
Hello Maddock, It is me Angel, I like how you have put a picture of Cinderella and her stepsisters in you'r Genia.ly, because you have put your elements on the people, that you have written down stuff for them. Thank you for telling us what to do for Genia.ly because some people will not know what to do. Maybe next time you could do some steps to show people when they get on genia.ly what to do because sometimes they might do diffrent things and not know what to do. What was your favourite part about doing something about this? -Angel
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
i agree with what you said about the stepsister, they are very bossy i couldn't imagine having sisters that act like this
ReplyDeleteHello Maddock, It is me Angel, I like how you have put a picture of Cinderella and her stepsisters in you'r Genia.ly, because you have put your elements on the people, that you have written down stuff for them. Thank you for telling us what to do for Genia.ly because some people will not know what to do. Maybe next time you could do some steps to show people when they get on genia.ly what to do because sometimes they might do diffrent things and not know what to do. What was your favourite part about doing something about this? -Angel
ReplyDeletewow mad dog this is thomas ur old friend remember me
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