I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Maddock.It's great to see that you have made a start with the learning that you get given for the holidays. Maybe next time you could tell us what it is that you needed to do. Have a great holiday and Christmas.
My name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
I’m so impressed by your recolouring of the painting! It looks incredible and a lot more realistic than the original. Your use of lots of different blues was super effective, it looks amazing!
Your wave reminds me of the beach. I love going to the beach, though not in stormy weather like your painting. My favourite part is building sandcastles! I like to collect shells to decorate my castles and usually try to build a moat around the edge as well. What does the wave remind you of?
Good job on starting the Summer Learning Journey, I look forward to seeing all your future blog posts! What activities are you most excited for?
Hello Maddock. I was just checking to see if you had completed and new SLJ activities. I can't wait to see what other things you have been doing. Have a great week.
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Hello Maddock.It's great to see that you have made a start with the learning that you get given for the holidays.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could tell us what it is that you needed to do.
Have a great holiday and Christmas.
Kia Ora Maddock,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
I’m so impressed by your recolouring of the painting! It looks incredible and a lot more realistic than the original. Your use of lots of different blues was super effective, it looks amazing!
Your wave reminds me of the beach. I love going to the beach, though not in stormy weather like your painting. My favourite part is building sandcastles! I like to collect shells to decorate my castles and usually try to build a moat around the edge as well. What does the wave remind you of?
Good job on starting the Summer Learning Journey, I look forward to seeing all your future blog posts! What activities are you most excited for?
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
Hello Maddock.
ReplyDeleteI was just checking to see if you had completed and new SLJ activities.
I can't wait to see what other things you have been doing.
Have a great week.