I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Maddock. The use of dark colours for your text works well for me.I like that you haven't included any vibrant colours. I find it interesting that you have included the word shy as this is a word that I don't think would describe you. I find you very out going and keen to get in and join in with all games. What is is that you like doing outdoors?. I like roller blading or going for bike rides. On fine days I also like to weed my garden.
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Hello Maddock.
ReplyDeleteThe use of dark colours for your text works well for me.I like that you haven't included any vibrant colours.
I find it interesting that you have included the word shy as this is a word that I don't think would describe you.
I find you very out going and keen to get in and join in with all games.
What is is that you like doing outdoors?.
I like roller blading or going for bike rides.
On fine days I also like to weed my garden.