My writing

 Hello bloggers today i will be sharing with you what i have been doing with my writing these are some of the screen shots i could get that will be all for today could you leave a comment saying what you think about it thanks byeeeeeee have a good day

genia.ly

hey bloggers today i will be sharing my work that we have been doing in the past week we have been using genia.ly it is and site its about character description when you check it out could you leave a comment what about what you think byeeee have a good week

show don't tell writing

kia ora  bloggers i'm going to show you my writing and my photo that i made we have been learning about show don't tell witch means  show your feelings not tell this is my writing leave a comment what you think

I  was scattering around the moon trying not to get catched by the aliens and
to top it off  the no gravity i decided to jump in one of the holes the I seen in
front of me I took a big leap and landed in the hole the aliens  ran straight
past me I climbed up and got out of the hole and was trying to figure out
how I got here  and then I felt a huge hit it was like a earthquake my feet
were glued to the ground as I had my hand to the side of my body
balancing my body so I don't fall over then I seen a big crack in the
ground coming towards me so I ran to my right and it was still coming for me
I  ran to my left it was still coming after me so I ran towards it and was
balancing over it and jumped to the side and i slipped and then got up
and ran and I was still following me so I jumped into another hole and
it stopped I got up and got out and ran it wasn't chasing me anymore.
So I kept running and I felt another crack and I came to a stop and planted
my feet to the ground and balanced my body with my arms to my left and
right on took a huge leap and hit my head and blacked out for about 3
minutes I woke up and started blinking to get my vision back I was in a
hole on the moon I pulled myself up looked around to see if I could see
any cracks  I didn't see any so i pulled myself up and got out of the hole
and started walking around to think about how I got here and I saw  a
rocket ship and  the door was wide open I climbed inside to see what
was in there and I saw a phone I turned it on but it didn't have  any
reception so I continued to look around 

scratch jam

hey bloggers today we had Emma a  computer specialist she taught us how to make a game on scratch jr the sprite is the character and we need to debug witch means fix all the problems

 100% looking ford to doing this again let  me know  by leaving a comment byeeeeeeeeeeeee

The force

Hello we have been using story board that  go check the link out we have been reading a book each group has a different book my group had a book called the force we have been focusing on our characters emoticons   

this is what i have done let me know what you think by leaving a comment have a good day byeeeee

present

hello we are writing  about a film named the present this is my writing let me know if you like it by leaving a comment thanks for reading my blog have a good day the reasons there highlighted yellow is because there verbs

reading blog post

Hello Bloggers this is my blog post about my reading i will be showing you about my blue box. its a sheet of questions and you put your answers on to a google slide-this is where you put  your answers

  thank you for reading my blog